YSaC, Vol. 399: How much is that doggy(?) in the window?

2009 August 20

Jen sends this one:

Puppies Needing a Good Home


Two girl puppies 13 weeks old needing a good home. The father is a golden doodle and the mother is Lasah, Boston Terror, and Corgie. The mother and father are both are dogs and they mated. she had 10 puppies and one died the first night. We had nine left and got ride of all of them but 2. Their is nothing wrong with them as far as we can tell. They eat find, play well with other dogs including the neighborhood dogs. They are just in need of a loving family to take them in. Please e-mail me if you have any questions.

“Oh! Oh! Mr. Kotter! Mr. Kotter!”

Why yes, this ad DOES raise a few questions:

  1. Wasn’t the “Boston Terror” a serial killer from the 1960s?
  2. Does the author think that sometimes things that are not dogs mate, and produce dogs?
  3. Or perhaps they think that immaculate conception is occasionally a possibility, which must in this case be deliberately ruled out?

Finally, I am intrigued by this statement:
“They eat find, play well with other dogs”

Clearly, this makes no sense. But how to correct it? The obvious choice would be:

“They eat fine, and play well with other dogs.”

However, I much prefer:

“They eat, find, and play well with other dogs.”

After all, that only requires one additional comma. What’s a little implied canine cannibalism in the endless quest for punctuational efficiency?

65 Responses leave one →
  1. 2009 August 20
    Jane permalink

    “The mother and father are both are dogs” = “are both OUR dogs.” See? This is why we MUST teach our children to E-NUN-CI-ATE: to help prevent deadly mistakes such as this.

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  2. 2009 August 20
    Jami(no "e") permalink

    I’m really glad that it was two dogs that mated and not some crazy combo like a cat and a rooster. That would have been an amazing feat.

    Also, what does find taste like? Is it only for dogs or can people eat it too because I’m slightly intrigued.

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    • 2009 August 20

      I don’t want dogs that eat find. The only thing I can think of is roadkill or other “treats” they might find, like “Oh, what a disgusting find, Rover! Please don’t eat that dead squirrel.”

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    • 2009 August 20
      corn flakes permalink

      I disagree, Jami-no-“e”, I would like a cat-rooster combo….a catster, if you will.

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      • 2009 August 21
        Count Blah permalink

        I would’ve gone with “pussycock” but then again I have the sense of humour of a twelve year old.

        *snigger*

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        • 2009 August 22
          Meredith permalink

          That was my first thought, too, and I was ashamed of myself. Ashamed until I saw that you wrote it first.

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        • 2009 August 25
          Rhiannon permalink

          Oh, wow. I think I just woke my fiance up with my snort-laughing… and I rarely, if ever, snort when I laugh. Thank you for the early-morning wake up!

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  3. 2009 August 20
    mark permalink

    For someone so high on themselves in terms of proper usage and grammar, I think you should look up the difference between the “immaculate conception” and “the virgin birth”.

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    • 2009 August 20
      Clovis Sangrail permalink

      Meeee-ow.
      Expecting people to be able to spell “our” correctly isn’t the same as knowing (or knowing and bending anyway for a good joke) the finer points of Catholic doctrine which get confused even by intellectuals.

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      • 2009 August 20
        Innana permalink

        Rationalization, thy name is Clovis.

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        • 2009 August 20
          Igor The Vigorous permalink

          O Lord Logic, Innana’s name is removed from thine scrolls.

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    • 2009 August 20
      Colleen in MA permalink

      I get high on myself too.

      Much cheaper and healthier than crack.

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    • 2009 August 20
      Mimi permalink

      There’s a difference? Wowzors, me done larned me sumpin on that thar internets thang.

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    • 2009 August 20

      Your catty criticism of this blog entry would have a stronger impact if you provided definitions of the Immaculate Conception and Virgin Birth of Jesus and how a confusion of such diminished the humor of this blog in the context of mating dogs. Given that the entry did not mention the Virgin Birth of Jesus, your inclusion of this religious tenet is without context. I will not do your job for you pertaining to issues not raised in the original blog entry. That was your job. You have left us bewildered.

      However, I will defend the use of the reference to the Immaculate Conception.

      The Craigslist post makes a point of explaining the conception of the puppies in question. This is typically an understood phenomenon that needs no such explanation. The lineage of the parents is detailed in the post. Such would normally be enough when selling or giving away dogs. To include the fact that “the mother and father are both are dogs and they mated” implies that some other form of conception is possible for dogs; either that non-canines can produce canines or that behaviors not classified as mating can result in a pregnancy. The blog entry engages in a bit of tongue-in-cheek activity (which is why I read this blog) to compare an unnecessary explanation of dogs mating with the possibility that the Holy Spirit could have visited the mother of this pup and through God’s grace, impregnated her with the blessing of puppies. The Holy Spirit being eliminated from the list of paternal candidates by the use of the text “both are dogs” and conception without the stain of sin being ruled out in favor of sperm delivery via old fashioned sex.

      Given your rude criticism of this blog entry, I cannot understand why you would have come here in the first place. I’ll await your explanations of the differences between the two Christian tenets you’ve cited pertaining to the original Craigslist post. Explaining the difference between the two in any other context would be off topic. Please include a description of how this misuse has dampened your pleasure of this YSaC entry and how the correction would have improved it.

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      • 2009 August 20
        Amaia permalink

        *s*

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      • 2009 August 20
        Colleen in MA permalink

        OK, maybe a joint. Once in a while. Like soon.

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        • 2009 August 20

          I could use a bourbon. When it gets colder, I’ll switch to Scotch.

          When people make bizarre comments instead of saying “I don’t get it,” I like to just kill the joke with as much verbiage as I can muster.

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      • 2009 August 20
        HappyNat permalink

        What Bill said . . .

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      • 2009 August 20
        mark permalink

        Dear Bill,

        The immaculate conception = the conception of Mary, the mother of Jesus, without the “stain of sin”

        The virgin birth = the Holy Spirit impregnating Mary with Jesus without human sexual intercourse.

        So, according to the dogma they are completely separate events. This difference relates to the post because a proper reference would have been to the virgin birth and not the immaculate conception.

        To answer your question, I think this problematic reference depleted my enjoyment of this post because it was incorrect and this blog seems to thrive on being correct. If one is going to be snarky concerning people’s use of grammar (the dreaded “their” “there” “they’re”) I think the people on their high horse should use correct references.

        I wasn’t intending to be rude, perhaps I was riled by the repeated references to the Ivy Leagues (in past posts) and jumped at the chance to use my Catholic indoctrination from my youth. Otherwise I quite enjoy the site.

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        • 2009 August 20
          ??? permalink

          No snarkiness intended, but I’m really not getting the difference between the two, unless by “the conception of Mary” you literally mean when Mary herself was conceived. Probably it is because I’m not Catholic. Is there any way you could clarify it further? I’m serious, I’d really like to know.

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        • 2009 August 20
          mark permalink

          Yes the conception of Mary.

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        • 2009 August 20

          Mark,

          I would posit that while the definition of the two may put the correct usage in your court, popular usage would put it back into the YSaC post’s.

          The Virgin Birth, according to the church, does look at the gammut of pregnancy from the point of conception to the physical preservation of Mary’s maidenhood at birth. In that sense, your approach does fit perfectly. However, the general public’s confusion comes from the approach that the term applies only to the birth.

          Conception being immaculate by the Holy Spirit would fit the usage here even if it differs from a more dogmatic approach. It’s viewed by the public as conception without the sin of sex when it’s both more and different than that. In a pedantic view, it’s wrong. But if you allow for shades of gray, it fits nicely.

          Definitions over-simplified and slightly askew, I’m sure. Catechism was a while back for me.

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        • 2009 August 20
          blake permalink

          “I wasn’t intending to be rude”
          proofreading isn’t limited to grammar. Before you hit the “submit” button, you should reread the comment. If there are no typos but you sound like a giant dick, you may still want to consider rephrasing.

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        • 2009 August 20
          Bill permalink

          Mark,

          I stand confused and corrected. You were correct in your initial statement. However, the lack of context, in recognition that we’re all confused, did nothing to correct the confusion.

          The Immaculate Conception was done with sex between Mary’s parents producing a pure vessel. Sex between man and woman took place. Thus, it does not apply to the Craigslist post.

          The Virgin Birth covered the conception by the Holy Spirit. That would have been correct.

          Thanks for correcting a Catholic boy. I feel so guilty.

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        • 2009 August 20

          Mark said dogma. Now that is just plain funny.

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      • 2009 August 20
        Vet Tech permalink

        It is technically possible for a dog to become pregnant without mating without it being an “immaculate conception”. Artificial insemination is done frequently when a bitch can’t or won’t become pregnant in the old fashioned way. Though I seriously doubt that’s the case here.

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        • 2009 August 20
          dogface permalink

          I’m a nihilist. Does this mean I’m going to Doggy Hell now?

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      • 2009 August 21
        sara permalink

        Love. I am filled with love at this.

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      • 2009 August 21
        mudslicker permalink

        Who would have thought that “puppies for sale” would bring out such a pedantic and dogmatic [pun!] rant?

        I believe the term “Jesus Tapdancing Christ” has finally found its niche and is finally wholly appropriate in this context! Get your Ecumenical Virgin Birth facts straight people or there will be no more posting at YS@C for you!!!

        “Oh my god, I am heartily sorry for having….blah..blah…blah….

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    • 2009 August 20

      MARK my words, someone has his panties in a twist.

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  4. 2009 August 20
    Traveler permalink

    I think that this one could be attributed exclusively to the kind of excessive trust on spell check that has been the ruin of many a poor boy. Fine/find is an easy mistake to made, considering that “e” is just above “d” on the keyboard; terror/terrier and are/our are mental slips that may happen while typing (I am quite prone to those, myself). And all of them are mistakes that Word will not mark as such.

    Today’s aesop: always proofread, kids.

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  5. 2009 August 20

    As I was reading this post, “Oxford Comma” by Vampire Weekend was playing on the iTunes. This is going to be a good day.

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  6. 2009 August 20

    I totally read the sentence the second way initially. I had to go back and reread to clarify their dietary needs.

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  7. 2009 August 20
    Lola permalink

    I’m wondering why they went to all of the trouble naming the five or so breeds incorporated in the puppies. “Small mixed breed” or “mutt” is faster and easier to type.

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  8. 2009 August 20

    “The mother and father are both are dogs and they mated.”

    Actually, if the mother and father were both dogs…I don’t think puppies would have been the outcome.

    You need bitch + dog = puppies.

    Both obviously weren’t neutered, so watch this space for more puppies.

    And while we’re on the subject…they ‘got ride’ of the other puppies. Were they deformed, ill and they went for a drive in the country?

    I’m asking because apparently ‘Their is nothing wrong with them as far as we can tell.’

    I think that’s what a vet is for; and at 13 weeks, one would be hoping that these puppies have been wormed and had their shots. Vets are pretty good at saying if an animal is in good health.

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    • 2009 August 20
      Schop permalink

      Wouldn’t that be ‘stud’ and ‘bitch’? They still both need to be of the species ‘dog’…

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      • 2009 August 20

        I think kennel enthusiasts, would make that distinction. After all, they are trying to follow the line…

        Given that the correct terminology for these puppies falls under the category – mutt, mongrel or if you’re very polite, Heinz 57.

        Dog and bitch are the correct terms.

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        • 2009 August 22
          Count Blah permalink

          When I was a kid I used my phenomenal extrapolation powers to determine that if a female dog is a “bitch”, the word for a male dog must be “bastard”. True story.

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    • 2009 August 20
      kristen55 permalink

      One would certainly hope they’ve seen a vet to at least start their vaccinations if they’re out playing with the ‘neighborhood dogs’. That’s why most CL puppies come with a side of parvo – no charge!

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  9. 2009 August 20
    Caro permalink

    I won’t even bother to climb up on my neutering soapbox. I’ll just award extra points for misspelling all three branches of the bitch’s lineage.

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    • 2009 August 20
      kristen55 permalink

      That’s ok, goldendoodle is typically presented as one word as well, so they actually managed to blow pretty much every breed they mentioned. Though actually the d in the ‘doodle’ part makes no sense, it’s a leftover from labradoodle, and the d actually goes with the labrador part. So technically it should be goldenoodle. Which I think I like better, it sounds like lunch 🙂

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      • 2009 August 20
        dissimilitude permalink

        Goldendoodle always sounds to me like some store-brand variety of Cheetos.

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      • 2009 August 20

        Goldenoodle sounds like a bad porn film.

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        • 2009 August 20
          Nathan permalink

          Or a James Bond villain.

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        • 2009 August 20
          corn flakes permalink

          Or a bad James Bond porn film villian.

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        • 2009 August 20
          corn flakes permalink

          “villain”

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        • 2009 August 20
          kristen55 permalink

          Is there such a thing as a BAD James Bond Porn film? I think not…

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    • 2009 August 20

      The neutering soapbox is quite appropriate here, I think, since (once again) we’re faced with the tiny mama/giant dad combination. Somehow I don’t envision people who sell puppies on craigslist knowing what “emergency c-section” means.

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  10. 2009 August 20
    Mrphysic permalink

    See in my mind – when they say ‘neighborhood dogs’ – I immediately think of Snoop Dogg. Apparently he plays fine with these two bi-atches (as one would expect). It also hints at why one of the 10 puppies died the first night – Calvin put ‘a cap in hith ath gangthta thtyle for shisl’.

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  11. 2009 August 20
    Terra Firm-uhhh permalink

    By the way- who gave Debbie Downer a login?

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  12. 2009 August 20

    Ahh, this post brought me back to my intro to bio college days when my professor was talking about species. He drew a picture of a chihuahua mating with a St. Bernard. It can be done but maybe it shouldn’t.

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  13. 2009 August 20

    Maybe “are” dogs are a species of dog.

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  14. 2009 August 20
    dogface permalink

    So how many dog breeds are in those puppies now? Five including the monstrous Boston Terror? Is this supposed to be some new chimeric designer dog or something? *sigh* Clueless backyard breeders make my brain hurt.

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  15. 2009 August 20
    misa permalink

    Boston TERROR is correct. They are only referred to as Boston TERRIERS to lure the unsuspecting into adopting these crazed beasts. It isn’t until after they’ve eaten half a sofa & the carpeting off of several stairs that we understand their true nature.

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  16. 2009 August 21
    Ele permalink

    I agree with Lola. These are mutts. The person who placed the craigslist post hopes to fool you into thinking that they were bred on purpose.

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  17. 2009 August 21
    sara permalink

    best entry ever!!! i haven’t laughed so hard all day

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  18. 2009 August 21
    judybat permalink

    “The mother and father are both are dogs and they mated.”

    I just keep coming back to reread this entry for this line. I mean, the whole thing is special, but this line takes it from golden to platinum.

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  19. 2009 August 22
    MJH permalink

    WTF is a Golden Doodle? Half Golden Retriever, half Daschund, half Poodle?

    *I realize there can only be 2 halves. I’m a South Park fan…

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    • 2009 August 25
      Rhiannon permalink

      A Goldenoodle is a cross between a Labradoodle and a Golden Retriever. And, for further clarification, a Labradoodle is a Labradore Retriever/Poodle cross. Crazy designer dogs…

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  20. 2009 August 25
    saywhat? permalink

    This is the first post I have ever made on here but had to. You guys are nuts. 🙂 Thanks for starting my day off with a laugh. 🙂

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  21. 2009 August 25
    pixie721 permalink

    Perhaps the craigslist poster feared that potential adopters would be scared off by part-wolf puppies. And thus felt the need to list the breeds involved, and then reiterate that both parents were dogs as opposed to a wolf and a dog.

    Because, when I adopt a puppy I always think, “Did a wolf contribute to this equation?”

    Pussycock, hehehehe. I’m twelve, too.

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  22. 2009 August 27
    goody goody permalink

    I have here one neutered boston terror and one lab, pit, akita mix mutt. Both are male and fixed. Anyone want a baby when they make “em?

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